This is the second assignment of my english class, we have to write our likes and dislikes n´stuff like that, so here it is...
Write a Lonely Hearts Ad about yourself! (about 80 words)Use some of the following expressions:
Hi. I'm __Francisco_.I love __Arts, from Music to poetry___.I'm really into ____Thrash metal and british and french novels and poetry___.I absolutely hate___Regaeton, criminals, and comunism__.I'm very interested in ___History and languages, even thou__I don't know anything about _eastern languages__.I spend a lot of time ___Playing guitar and drawing__.I don't spend enough time __On the internet, i have better things to do_.So if you're looking for someone like me drop me a line!
this is sooo embarasing XD
Again good piece of writing but why the dashes? Also you need to use linking words such as and, but, however..to make your writing more natural.
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